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The Pinch of the Crab

A small boy feels sad and bewildered when the tiny crab he befriended on the beach pinches him, and his confusion deepens after witnessing the violent arrest of a teenager. A mother is awakened in the middle of the night by a phone call from her son who has been jailed for possession of marijuana. A young girl begs her father not to leave after a huge earthquake shakes their home. When her estranged husband comes to return their pet Golden Retriever, a woman hesitates before opening the door. A man tells his wife that he has given large sums to a high official in the government department that awarded his firm a contract, but not to worry, he’s doing everything by the book. A journalist investigating the murder of a pro-independence leader suspects that the CIA is after him. An Amerian exchange student’s announcement of her engagement to a young Puerto Rican who shares her passion for magic realism provokes the revelation of devastating truths about her beloved father.

Why did I write these stories?

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During the long aftermath of Hurricane Maria, when vistas of lush green foliage and colorful blossoms had been replaced by scenes of fallen branches and dangling electric cables, I felt as disoriented as the little boy bitten by a crab. It was then that the idea of a collection of stories exploring personal responses to the crises of island life took shape.

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What readers  and reviewers say about The Pinch of the Crab...

“In these stories, universal themes in literature grip readers like a vise. The author depicts the external calamities of the Tropics in an uneasy alliance with internal worlds struggling to make sense of life. Reader beware: these characters will trigger emotions in you so complex you didn’t know you were capable of experiencing them.”

 

María Soledad Rodríguez, English Department, University of Puerto Rico

 

“The Pinch of the Crab brings together intergenerational and intercultural conflict in a world of unknowns, deception, and loyalty. If anyone wants to catch a glimpse at the complexity of living in Puerto Rico after hurricanes and human-fabricated disasters, these stories are a must read. They take you through family friction and unconditional love, and the greatest betrayal with the gentleness of oregano brujo leaves.”

 

Yolanda Rivera Castillo, author of Emergencia de la luz and Baladas de Tentación y destierro

 

“The stories in this collection portray the many strains and pressures placed on family dynamics as they fragment and re-set in new circumstances. Partners struggle with differing conceptions of gender roles and conflicting ideals in our rapidly changing society. Parents facing conflicts in their own lives struggle to guide their children. The isolating effects of inner turmoil are explored, as well as the heightened sensitivity to the feeling of hurt that unleashes rage. The reader is mesmerized as seemingly ordinary and casual interactions escalate into psychological and physical violence.”

 

Carol M. Romey, psychologist

Excerpts from the book review of The Pinch of the Crab and other stories

by Carmen Dolores Hernández, El Nuevo Día, February 13, 2022

The Book of Betrayals

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A married woman relives a terrible incident of her youth that her parents have chosen to ignore; a young woman discovers the true nature of the father who brought her up with love; a little boy faces violence—from animals, in the social environment, and that which lurks in the family—without really understanding what is happening; parents blame their son’s friend for corrupting him when the truth is quite the opposite.

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The ten stories in this book all revolve around betrayals. Especially painful betrayals that take place in the bosom of families that seem to be, if not happy, at least more or less normal. What provokes conflict is a change of perspective caused by failure to meet the usual expectations: parents who are not really protective; mothers who don’t turn out to be so dedicated: the bitter discovery that love is not as enduring or as absolute as expected. The flaw—the crack in the polished surface of conventional expectations—has been there from the beginning, invisible to trusting eyes.

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The story titled “Heavy Downpour” departs somewhat from this pattern. In this story, it is not the family or one of its members that betrays expectations of justice, but rather society itself that persecutes those who try to put justice into practice, threatening the established order by doing so. The character who appears in the house of a prosperous American housewife living in Puerto Rico, a friend from her rebellious youth, seems to present a threat to her and to the community, but that perception is erroneous. It is the political structure that betrays expectations of equity, justice and democracy. The issue is the political situation of Puerto Rico, apparently stable, although any challenge to this stability gives rise to institutional violence.

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Southard writes in simple, straightforward English. Her style does not draw attention in and of itself; rather, it serves as a filter that allows us to “read” not only the significance of the words but the intentions that hide behind them that are not immediately apparent to the interlocutors within the stories. Moreover, she is good at handling premonitions, and also surprises, as in the story Fallen Branches, in which the action seems to point in one direction, but culminates in an unexpectedly explosive outcome.

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(Translated from the original in Spanish with permission.  See below for original in Spanish)

Reseña (Book Review) The Pinch of the Crab and other stories

Carmen Dolores Hernández: El Nuevo Dia, 13 de febrero de 2022

El libro de las traiciones

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Una mujer casada revive un incidente terrible de su juventud que sus padres han elegido ignorar; una joven descubre la verdadera personalidad del padre que la crió con cariño; un niño pequeño se enfrenta a la violencia -de los animales, del entorno social y la que irrumpe en la familia -sin entender bien lo que sucede; unos padres culpan a un amigo de su hijo por “corromperlo” cuando lo cierto es justamente lo contrario.

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 Los diez cuentos de este libro giran todos en torno a traiciones. Son traiciones especialmente dolorosas que se dan en el seno de familias que parecen ser, si no felices, más o menos normales. Lo que provoca el conflicto es un cambio de perspectiva ocasionado por una falla de las expectativas habituales: los padres que no son, realmente, protectores; las madres que no resultan tan dedicadas; el amargo descubrimiento de que el amor no es tan duradero ni tan absoluto como lo esperado. La falla -la grieta en la superficie pulida de las expectativas convencionales- ha estado allí desde el principio, invisible para los ojos confiados.

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El cuento titulado “Heavy Downpour” se aparta un poco de este esquema. En él no es la familia ni uno de sus miembros lo que traiciona las expectativas de justicia sino la sociedad misma, que persigue a quien trata de practicar esa justicia, trastocando al hacerlo el orden establecido. El personaje que aparece en casa de una próspera ama de casa estadounidense radicada en Puerto Rico, un amigo de su juventud rebelde, parece presentar una amenaza, tanto para ella como para la colectividad, pero esa percepción está equivocada. El peligro real proviene de la sociedad establecida, que no provee las salvaguardas adecuadas para la vida y el progreso social. Es la estructura política la que traiciona las expectativas de equidad, justicia y democracia. El asunto se refiere a la situación política puertorriqueña, aparentemente estable, aunque cualquier amenaza a tal estabilidad suscite la violencia institucional.

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Barbara Southard, estadounidense que lleva muchos años en Puerto Rico, los más como profesora de la UPR, ha sabido penetrar tras el espejismo de las apariencias no solo individuales sino sociales. Sus cuentos, más que críticos, son revelatorios. El ambiente local -muy bien captado- presenta un espejo de la naturaleza humana en su modalidad puertorriqueña: la incapacidad de enfrentarse a la realidad, la necesidad de mantener las apariencias, las convenciones relativas a la familia. Son actitudes difícilmente discernibles para quienes están inmersos en la sociedad que las sustenta, pero quizás evidentes ante la mirada de afuera. La nuestra es una sociedad que se cree estable aunque la violencia -súbita, inesperada- se esconda tras las convenciones generalmente aceptadas.

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Southard escribe en un inglés directo y sencillo. Su estilo no llama la atención sobre sí; se trata más bien de un filtro que permite “leer” no solo los significados de las palabras sino las intenciones que se esconden tras ellas y que no son inmediatamente aparentes a los interlocutores de dentro de los cuentos mismos. Maneja bien, además, las premoniciones y también las sorpresas, como en el cuento “Fallen Branches”, cuya acción parece apuntar en una dirección para culminar con un estallido inesperado.

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Aunque Southard ha escrito varios libros de carácter histórico, entre ellos “Senderos para un sueño. Geografía e historia de Estados Unidos de América” (2000), con este volumen de cuentos se suma a la ya larga lista de escritores estadounidenses de ficción que han utilizado a Puerto Rico como escenario o motivación para su escritura, lista que incluye a Hunter S. Thompson y a Robert Friedman.

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